Creator of Psychiatric Tales. Cartoonist, Writer, Thing
Monday 4 October 2010
Uncle Bob And The Frankenstein Monster
Latest chapter of Uncle Bob Adventures. I'm now around half way through the book which will be out from Blank Slate next year. Feel free to point out any errors. Thank you.
The only thing I would change would be the last page, first panel. There should be a question mark at the end of Uncle Bob's statement rather than a flat sentence. It would go from,
"What have I done."
to
"What have I done?"
I'm always mystified as to why people seem to have trouble putting question marks when appropriate. Or was this intentional on your part?
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Really enjoyed this. You have 'artic' for 'arctic' though.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant stuff! Fantastic scenery.
ReplyDeletePage 1: "help me" -> "held me"?
ReplyDeleteOh, WOW! So beautiful! And what a great sad ending. You're amazing, Darryl! xx
ReplyDeleteenjoyable read.
ReplyDeletethought i'd join in with the proof-reading, if it's helpful -- lightening> i presume you meant lightning.
The only thing I would change would be the last page, first panel. There should be a question mark at the end of Uncle Bob's statement rather than a flat sentence. It would go from,
ReplyDelete"What have I done."
to
"What have I done?"
I'm always mystified as to why people seem to have trouble putting question marks when appropriate. Or was this intentional on your part?
Dear DeBT.
ReplyDeleteI just forgot the question mark. Will correct that and other things on the next pass.
wow this is so tragic :(
ReplyDeleteNice work! (As always!)
ReplyDeleteThats an awesome story and great illustration simple yet effective .
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteJust clicked through from the Frankensteinia blog. Now I'm a fan and waiting in line for the first Uncle Bob book.
That fast....
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