Creator of Psychiatric Tales. Cartoonist, Writer, Thing
Really enjoyed this. You have 'artic' for 'arctic' though.
Brilliant stuff! Fantastic scenery.
Page 1: "help me" -> "held me"?
Oh, WOW! So beautiful! And what a great sad ending. You're amazing, Darryl! xx
enjoyable read.thought i'd join in with the proof-reading, if it's helpful -- lightening> i presume you meant lightning.
The only thing I would change would be the last page, first panel. There should be a question mark at the end of Uncle Bob's statement rather than a flat sentence. It would go from,"What have I done."to"What have I done?"I'm always mystified as to why people seem to have trouble putting question marks when appropriate. Or was this intentional on your part?
Dear DeBT.I just forgot the question mark. Will correct that and other things on the next pass.
wow this is so tragic :(
Nice work! (As always!)
Thats an awesome story and great illustration simple yet effective .
Wow! Just clicked through from the Frankensteinia blog. Now I'm a fan and waiting in line for the first Uncle Bob book.That fast....
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